Turmoil.....

As i lay my head down
to think
Realizing my thoughts are
not my own to keep
Not one not two but three
of me
Tossing an turning inside
my head
Never remembering what
it said
Running away as fast as
i can
Never far enough to
understand who i am
Help me now help me
then take it away
make it end............

I guess no one likes my poems, are they 2 morbid for u or wat..... sorry

Nah, you can keep 'em coming. Just because they are not being commented on, does not mean that they are not liked.

Personally, I LOVE morbid poems, ala Sylvia Plaith.

Good Work HoG

I like it...

Well thanx Surge, means alot..... i do have more, mostly they are about myself, im told its a good way to deal with things in ur life. Again thanx for always being so kind.

Well thanx nukes, sorry at first didn't see ur reply i do thank u for ur opinion.

nice work