I stare at the reflection in the mirror. I see the face of a stranger staring back. Always at war with itself, kicking, scratching, punching, biting; Scares from previous wounds are harsh reminders of his troubled past.
This stranger seems so familiar but the reflection starts to blur, starts to fade; Life draining from the face until it slowly reveals my own. Cold. Empty. Lifeless; Troubles past haunt me so.
I bite, punch, scratch, kick. Wounds getting deeper, more painful; Hurting. Killing. Soothing. Blood is pouring.
Who is this stranger in the mirror I see before me?
Heart of GOLD
Nov 12 2007, 07:57 PM
Wow i really like this, seems pretty deep thou..... i have one u might like that i'll put up soon, called Turmoil. If ur interested ??
Gitano
Nov 12 2007, 08:14 PM
Check the expiry date HOG.
Heart of GOLD
Nov 13 2007, 09:10 PM
ok well thats not something im good at yet, but thanks for bringing it to my attention.... was just sorta skipping through things an found that never thought to look for a date, i do apologize
W@RP@T}{
Nov 14 2007, 12:22 AM
Who cares
I liked it too, stick your's up!!!
There's no expiry on good poetry.
RenegadeNukes
Nov 14 2007, 04:49 AM
100% Agree.
I like the story so thanks for bringing it up again
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