Well I was driving to hockey the other day and wrote this poem to my while driving. Figured I would put it on here so everyone could mock/compliment my poetry skillz..

She makes me smile,
She brings joy to my life,
She cares for me like no other,
yes even more than my mother.
She is more beautiful than a Sunset,
who is she you ask?
She is my beloved Nunette.

So feel free to mock/compliment. I can handle the truth.

EDIT: Changed to how it should be. She makes me smile, and not ms. Hell she doesn't even know how to use a computer.

Here's the truth: you are whipped

StanDarsh - Took the words out of my mouth... But to be able to come up with that while going to hockey - Takes some sort of skill.

driving and typing skillz. bout it eh?

One of a kind. So, is there a Nunette or you justed used that name to rhyme it with sunset?

Nice poem. Short. To the point. But yeh, you are whipped, but then again, so are most guys with GF's

By the way... You've got a spelling mistake on the first line. Looks like your typing/driving skills aren't that great X-D

Hockey?!? *snigger*

where is the whipped smiley when you need it?

Nunette

Nope I made the typo here. whoops... hehe.


One of the many names I have for her, just thought that one would fit in better as it does rhyme with Sunset.

so she isn't a 'Nunette'?

As in "a small nun"? Cos if she acts like a nun, and you're still whipped, then there is no hope.

Suggestion: try a more subtle approach. Less is more.

I liked it

CUTE !!!!

Thanks for the suggestion.

Thanks Mase112 and Fruitloop.

Less is more......... hmmm how can there be less in a poem like that:

She
She
She
yes
She
who
She

????

hmmm that doesn't work

thats nice WP

Nice poem W( at )RP( at )T}{

Go back to drawing on cave walls. The concept of 'subtle' is clearly leagues out of your rudimentary grasp.