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Catherine
Love on the Internet . . .

Though I wasn't looking for anyone new,
One day I got e-mail and in it was you.
Charming, sensitive and so debonair,
I strongly resisted it go anywhere.

But letters and stories captured my heart,
Filled me with passion almost from the start.
Love on the Internet, how could it be?
These things just don't happen to people like me.

But doves and butterflies flew into our lives,
Carrying messages we could not deny.
Each person has meaning and love to express,
And we could deny our hearts nothing less.

It's a beautiful love that has grown between us,
Something beyond any words we discuss.
Much deeper than LOL, cyber kisses and such,
Far down to our souls, beyond human touch.

My love's not confined by what it can see,
I feel you, I taste you, I experience your dream.
Close my eyes, and I envision what in my heart I can hear,
"Love knows no boundaries, no distance, no fear."

It's the soul that captures our love in a way
That eternally melts hearts together to stay.
Fused and sealed forever as one,
Love has its way and new life is begun . . .
Phoenix
QUOTE
My love's not confined by what it can see,
I feel you, I taste you, I experience your dream.
Close my eyes, and I envision what in my heart I can hear,
"Love knows no boundaries, no distance, no fear."



I especially liked this part. I think this is a great poem, because I know how hard it is to write about these things without ending up in cliches or sounding cheesy.

My hat off to you. biggrin.gif
Gitano
That is the first poem in a long time that has, I dont even know how do describe what I feel.
I suppose "touched me" would be the way of expressing it, but it feels inadequate.

Even though I have never experienced the theme, I can relate to and through those words, experience the feelings that just seem to radiate from each stanza.

Wow, great poem.

I think we should rent a billboard, and put this on it:

Close you're eyes, and envision what you're heart can hear,
Love knows no boundaries, no distance, no fear.

My favourite part of the poem as well.
Catherine
QUOTE(Gitano @ May 13 2005, 11:13 AM)


I think we should rent a billboard, and put this on it:

Close you're eyes, and envision what you're heart can hear,
Love knows no boundaries, no distance, no fear.

My favourite part of the poem as well.
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Hehehe thanks guys but perhaps one day when I can get some strapping young guy to model on the biillboard I will do it!!!
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