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The last stanza is very nice
The third stanza went over my head:
I don't understand some of the imagery.
The third stanza went over my head:
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crystal blue, soft love shining through
clear snow glowing underneath the veil
fire red gloss soaking through
blue black waves framing the pearl
clear snow glowing underneath the veil
fire red gloss soaking through
blue black waves framing the pearl
I don't understand some of the imagery.
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ah angel4everyoung
a girl after my own heart
Dont you want to please do me a favour? Look in off topic for the creative strokes section and post your poetry there? Its our own little creative writing section, and there peopel can post commentary to their hearst content. People might not find your excellent work here.
Once its up there, i post some critiques. Glad to have you writing with us, a real asset to the group i see.
a girl after my own heart
Dont you want to please do me a favour? Look in off topic for the creative strokes section and post your poetry there? Its our own little creative writing section, and there peopel can post commentary to their hearst content. People might not find your excellent work here.
Once its up there, i post some critiques. Glad to have you writing with us, a real asset to the group i see.
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