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Heart of GOLD
post Mar 7 2008, 10:56 AM
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Parents....

Oh mother an father why
did u bother
You were to young it was
no fun
After i was born u both
were so torn
He couldn't be faithful
u were so hateful
Your marriage never lasted
He was always so blasted
Your second marriage felt right
was it worth the fight
My father created me
My step father hated me
My mother died an my step
father lied
Soon my real father passed
away too an left me so blue
Again i was alone who would
have known
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post Mar 7 2008, 12:34 PM
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Nice. But I can't help but be reminded of a song by a punk band, nofx.


"What's The Matter With Parents Today?"
Mom and dad
How'd you get so rad?
When exactly did you get so hip?

Wearing teenage clothes
You're always coming to my shows
And telling me that I should mellow out

It's absurd
They're singing every word
You're not supposed to like my band
Things I like you don't understand

So please put down that rum and Coke
That's not behaviour for old folk
Can we just hang on holidays
Dad and mom
What planet are you from?
And what convinced you to pack up and leave
Doing drugs
And asking me for hugs
What's the matter with parents today?

Not again
When will it end?
Dad's dressing like Motley Crue
And why is moms hair dyed bright blue?

And stayin' out till 2 or 3
Then having sex publicly
I thought the apple fell far from the tree

Mom and dad, I think you ought
To quit smoking so much pot
And hanging with my friends

Laying round, on the couch
With my Misfits records out
Softly banging your head

Maybe its just a passing phase
What's the matter with my parents these days?
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post Mar 7 2008, 11:34 PM
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That's pretty deep, HOG. Nice poem.


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"Bigotry and hatred are enemies to us all. Grace, mercy and forgiveness will help a man walk tall." - John Mellencamp

"There are more things in Heaven and Earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy." - Hamlet

"I'd rather be a failure at something I love, than a success at something I hate." - George Burns

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Heart of GOLD
post Mar 10 2008, 06:19 AM
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Thanx Surge, means alot .... hope all is well with u



QUOTE(Surge @ Mar 7 2008, 11:34 PM) *
That's pretty deep, HOG. Nice poem.
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post Mar 11 2008, 10:24 PM
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hope all is well with u

Not actually. Still battling with a stomach bug. pinch.gif
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post Mar 18 2008, 06:43 PM
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QUOTE(Surge @ Mar 12 2008, 01:24 AM) *
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hope all is well with u

Not actually. Still battling with a stomach bug. pinch.gif


hope your ok
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post Aug 17 2009, 07:30 AM
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no) nice:) well done...
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