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Chino
post Feb 18 2009, 04:13 PM
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WHICH WAY TO LIFE?


From the womb to the tunnel


And the journey is under way

From a silver and gold conical funnel

Life has started

Yet it's dripping away.



Dark to few

Illusion of light to most.

Where the hell are the angels

Supposedly guarding their post?



The blind men rush by you

There goes Satan on his Harley bike!

Should you join the bright parade too?



The sharks pull you down with all of their might

But you fight and you fight

And someday you'll find purpose

In your star and its light

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Little Devil
post Mar 14 2010, 05:20 PM
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Nicely constructed and use of imagery. smile.gif Good reading.


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