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Aug 24 2008, 02:33 PM
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Regular Member Group: Regular Posts: 75 Joined: 20-October 07 From: Oregon USA Member No.: 10,729 Sex: Female |
Freedom.... Broken People Surround us all Heaven or hell From which did She fall Pieces of her Scattered all about Listening to people Yell an shout Little girl crying All alone Somebody plz Bring her home Listen to the rain Wash away her pain No where left to hide As she takes her One last finale ride Stuck in the darkness That surrounds her soul Hoping an praying for Her light to glow Bright enough to Find her way Through the dark Tunnel of death Its home she hopes To rest............. HOG |
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Mar 14 2010, 05:22 PM
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Regular Member Group: Senior Posts: 76 Joined: 14-March 05 From: Lonehill - JHB Member No.: 4,437 Sex: Male |
Very nice. Love the flow and very well written. I'm liking this one quite a lot
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